The devil night

          Mark, Frank and Tom are friends since they're children. They live in Canada with their parents and last vacation they decided to travel to California. The city was well-known because of the best parties in the summer and the most beautiful girls spending their vacation there. Their wish was to go there by themselves and do whatever they wanted.

          On January 6th the three friends arrived in California and they went to the hotel to take a nap to go out later. That night was going to be the most famous party of all summer in the city. But there was one problem: they didn't understand why the hotel was so empty, but some days before something strange had happened there. People had seen ghosts when the lights went off.

           They were ready to the party and when they got in the elevator, the lights went off again. They got stuck in it, so they started shouting for help, but nobody could listen to them. After a long time, trying to shout louder and louder, they gave up going to the best party. They decided to talk about frightening stories, when they felt something touching them. Was it something or maybe someone? They were afraid of what might happen. Someone started making noises with the hands and the mouth. They became quiet as they had never been before.

            Fortunately, the lights went on and the elevator became bright. They saw a figure going out. The only thing they wanted to do was to get out of the elevator and to go to the party, which might be almost finished. They passed by a man who looked at them with mysterious eyes. When they arrived at the party, they saw that same man there.

            During the party, they were looking for the pictures with reports on the walls, when they saw one with the man's picutre saying about how tragic his death had been. They became so frightened, but Mark woke up. It was just a nightmare.

on  June 11, 2008  at  9:59 AM

This was a very creative composition. I had so much fun reading it.
Thanks for posting it!
Ronaldo

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